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Re: A Scoundrel's Heart: Chapter 1
Hi there, Tiff. Finally getting around to this. So, I have to say that I do like this story quite a bit. You have very strong characterization here. I can ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: And Yet You Still Love Me.
Hi there, Kaywiia. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is an interesting poem. It's a different take on the traditional love poem. Instead of ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: The Forest of Eternal Depression
Hi there StrangeGirl. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this isn't really doing much for me. I think a lot of the problem with that ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: A Seasonal Answer
Hi there, Galerius. Just thought that I would pop in and give this a quick review. So, I really like this poem. It reminds me a lot of some Chinese ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: What we want.
Hello, Noksha! I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, I'm trying to figure out what is up with this poem. I'm not sure just what you ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Cattails
Hi there, Bear! Glad to see you posting again! I'm going to get right down to this and review it. So, I liked this story. It's very simple and heartfelt. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Sheild Maiden
Hi there shineondiamondeyes. I'm Conrad, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this is too short, in my opinion. You really need to expand on this. You have quite ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Dancers in the Darkness
Hi there, Jennafina! It's me, and I'm here to review this. So, I really like this. It's got a good balance between description, narrative, and dialogue, which I think is ...
Jan 26, 2010 -
Re: Monster Love
Hi there, MattRaven94. I'm Conrad, as you know. Sorry I didn't get around to this sooner. I got your PM after an eight hour plane flight. I wasn't really in ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: This is Life Now.
Hi there, JordanEmert. I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, you have some conflict here, which is good. But you need to have something a ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Kettering
Hi there, Kylan. I'm just popping by to give you a review on this. So, despite the way in which you jumped from first to third person throughout this piece, ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: A Woman in the Sun
Hi there, foxfire. I'm Conrad, and I will be your reviewer for today. So, my first advice to you would be to ax that first paragraph with that long description ...
Jan 21, 2010 -
Re: Bedouin Song
Hi there, Kamas. I'll be taking a look at this today. So, I have to say that I rather like this. Your description here is rather superb. You manage to ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Easter Bunnies Attack: Part 2
Hi there, magnusbane13. I am Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. This is hilarious. The sheer outlandishness of this whole thing, combined with some pretty funny ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Laugh at the World
Hi there, wonderingkate. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. This is an interesting poem. You've got a very nice framework here, but I think that this ...
Jan 11, 2010
